The two musical rivals unleash their arsenal of musical weapons. Mr Bass and Mr Treble were having a musical fight. So they came into the middle of the Town Square and Tippy was surrounded. Mr Treble was playing nice sleepy music until Mr bass blue a big loud trumpet and Tippy gave Mr bass attention. Mr Treble was a disappointed wreck. Mr base without a big happy cry.
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I'm Alex . I see that you made this writing at school and it is epic you described a lot about it maybe next time you could add different words then the original words like lets say big you can say Jumbo or gigantic any way keep up the amazing work. Bye.
ReplyDeletethank you so much and I'll do what you say
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