This week we learn about this persuasive writing and I had to write about should school break time be longer? I think no, it should not be banned.
Persuasive writing is about trying to convince someone about a topic. You need to have convincing sentence starters, rhetorical questions and information.
What do you think about this topic.
Should school break time be longer?
I believe school break should be longer because it's good for education.
Are school believe that we learn from playing. Playing teachers are to work as a team, this will help us to be good at collaboration. Working together will help us to be good listeners, good leaders and good followers.
When was outside we normally play ball games and best helps our hand-eye coordination. These skills help our brain to develop skills. Ball games helps us to learn communication.
Fresh aire helps our brain to function properly. My Mum tells me to go outside to clear the cobwebs, this means to take away all the fuzz from my brain from watching TV or been inside to long. longer play time will get the cobwebs out of our brain for learning time.
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